Thursday, October 16, 2008

Let it rain

Nope I wont give up trying to write sucky poetry :P


Twas a night I tread through the woods
whilst silence filled the wild.
As I walked in awe and a twinge of dread
thunder rolled above my head.
Soon the night smothered out the moonlight,
a slice of icy wind crawled up my spine.
I looked to the skies and saw em fall
slow at first glimmering like drops of stars.
Soon the heavens began to cascade
and the shadows continued to fade.
The cold was now almost in my soul
how I longed for a warm hand to hold.
"Why does fate have to be unfair?"
I asked the gusts of air.
They drifted to me carried by the wind,
these voices spoke from beyond...
"Do not despair, for beyond these realms
another soul walks.
Braving the dark and frost ridden night
he waits for the warmth of your hand.
The night is darkest before the dawn
and when twilight breaks your hearts will unite.
Until that time this pain will remain,
to ease it out we send you the rains.
Smile and you'll feel warmth arise,
in knowing that these woods
will teem with life once again.
But until that time arrives,
let it rain... let it rain."

7 comments:

Sandeep S said...

If you can knock some one's socks off, which you definitely did, I dont think its anywhere close to "sucky poetry"! And glad to know we have similar tastes in blog design! :>

cheerio...

Amateur Expert said...

Oh my god!!!
This is brilliant Raksha.
Truly amazing talent u have gal.
Keep it going

Pi said...

Nothing quite as calming as the rain :) ... N that was pretty good... am fairly certain 'sucky' is not the right word 4 it!

--xh-- said...

u call this 'sucky poetry' ? u must be out of ur mind... nice line, man.. like the way you sketched it...

sam_spotted said...

hey tat rockz fr poetry.... :)
u need not rhyme it to make it a poem :)
tatz wat i learnd frm school literature haha :)

newayz..... really gud :)

Preeeeeee said...

truly truly amazing... u go girl! :)

Soumya said...

amazin things do come in small packages...ur the perfect example!!
amazin poetry darlin...way far from suckin!!rock on!!