Yet another poetry attempt!! (yeah i've lost my mind.. literally)
Peace reigned until then
then, when you came along
and at that moment it escaped me
like a caged bird set free.
Looking for that which I lost,
I swam through the sea
the green ocean of my misery.
I searched the multitude of minds
for the one that's only mine.
In this blue vortex of altered reality
a hundred miles long
there it was nestled in a song.
I embraced my warm mind
glad to be whole again
and aloud to you I cried
"You may have tried,
but save your glee
for I have found me,
I will not surrender to thee"
A flash of blinding purple lights,
dazed I saw you laugh
"This time its not your mind I seek
for now I know that its not weak".
A spark of realization in my soul
flared at the speed of thought
and with a clouded sense of de ja vu
I watched as your words came true.
Quick as a blot of light
before I could put up a fight,
it escaped me ere I had a chance
without even a backward glance.
Exhausted now, I set out to start
a new quest for my stolen heart.
13 comments:
hehe nice n funny . U def getting betr with poetry gurl ;)
"You may have tried,
but save your glee
for I have found me,
I will not surrender to thee" love this :)
(yeah i've lost my mind.. literally)...
I beg to differ... You have not lost ur mind, but making others loosing theirs!!
It is definitely a good one here!!
A little biblical touch here and there!
Nice one....
@shubs n ajay: thanx :)
"for I have found me,
I will not surrender to thee" - nice.. love the lines... :)
"for I have found me,
I will not surrender to thee" - nice lines.. me likes the poem :)
@anoop thanx! :) u seem to like watever i write at 4a.m
"I have found me, I will not surrender to thee..."...Perfect!!
Lost but found...dont get lost again for we're not sure how long will it take to find urself again..:-)..great work lady!
too late soumya.. too late :)
first time here... and this was intense! i need to read such stuff at least twice before making any sense out of it :)
now, i'd would really like to read more of ur 'work'. not joking....
thank u danny boy!! :) hope its a good time-pass
Cool post... but who is this guy who steals ur heart in d end ;)...
@robin: aah but thats the eternal mystrey.. wont be fun if its solved prematurely
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